Review Detail of Alexandra_Biclar in Demon Salvation

The writing style was a bit crooked. Making the thought a little bit vague. Some punctuations are absent. The plot and the characters were a bit suboptimal. But we haven't reach halfway the story so I guess it can improve as it flows. As for the world background, it's not as detailed as it's supposed to be but it's fine. The grammar? It's quite congenial. It's not hard to understand. And uhm everybody improves and so should you (that's a compliment). And never give up. Keep it up!