Review Detail of MizA in Street Lights

Hi. It's your neighbor. I've read just 1 1/2 chapters because I'm in a rush. It's interesting. You lost me not because of the 'prologue' but because something is very confusing and 'lacking' in the middle of Chapter 2. Also, add spaces between the paragraphs to make the reading flow smoothly. It's a good trick to keep your readers reading. Your synopsis needs to reveal a bit more to caught the reader's attention. The cover is not stimulating enough, it's static and your story isn't. I like your writing style. You show, don't tell. It's gold. Good luck.