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From what I read so far, I really like your spacial description(the ambiences where the scenes take place). Everything is well written, although you have a tendency of writing ' ... ' a bit too often. Also there is a funny mistake in the first chapters, that REALLY needs to be updated.

My Demon Pet System

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Thank you for the review! What is the mistake? :)