Review Detail of CHARz1e_Char in My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy

-English is probably not the authors first language. they would definitely benefit from an editor. currently the text is jarring with all of the typos- not misspelled words but the wrong words or word endings. - the chapters and story are average at chapter 3. nothing really stands out as unique other than the name Halora. essentially it just seems like popular copy and paste but the writing is more on the side of average than good. oh, and the FL seems to have a randomly selected phobia- there's probably a reason later, but at this point it feels randomly selected. - the only world building that's happened so far is descriptions of people's clothes which I don't think really matters since scenes and days change so quickly.