Review Detail of Apprentice4 in Immortal Ted Xi

Another author shamelessly reviewing his work here. I'm trying to do something new with this work, there'll be little romance(as most of you can guess with the synopsis) and a lot of absurd comedy. It will be slow-paced as Ted needs to receive lots of shocks to grow in character. I'm open to suggestions and criticisms about any aspect of the work. It started as a joke, let's see how far it goes..