Review Detail of Dylila in I Experienced an SSS Encryption

Well, its quite good so far, but because the different between the novel and the raw mtl in aspects of names, settings and background ideas, I decided to focus in this novel, so I hope that this novel will be pickup. P.S Author, I humbly and sincrely hope that you can improve this novel so that it will not be like the raw one because too much error.....