To be honest I like the story background but the inner writing I don't like it. Reading the first volume I think that the first disciple has no respect and gratitude for MC as her master, it's more like a casual respect not like a nascent soul stage cultivator master should have.
PurpleSpring
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giốngPurpleSpring:Have taken it into consideration and has started to use a more respectful tone from the disciples towards the mc, mostly just did not know how to write a disciple... After all first time I'm writing something like it xD Personally also think that there was a need for a bit more respect towards the master (Xuan Hao) and hopefully I will get it right xD
First thank you for taking my view into consideration. I am totally fine with MC character and even I don't want to see another of those arrogant MC but I think a master should get its rightful respect as someone who changed a person's life by that person. But don't give it too much thought as I know how difficult it is to write something just go as you like 😃
Have taken it into consideration and has started to use a more respectful tone from the disciples towards the mc, mostly just did not know how to write a disciple... After all first time I'm writing something like it xD Personally also think that there was a need for a bit more respect towards the master (Xuan Hao) and hopefully I will get it right xD
Floating_Clouds:First thank you for taking my view into consideration. I am totally fine with MC character and even I don't want to see another of those arrogant MC but I think a master should get its rightful respect as someone who changed a person's life by that person. But don't give it too much thought as I know how difficult it is to write something just go as you like 😃