Review Detail of WetAppleDream in Supreme Douluo(Dropped)

hmm too fast paced, no intro? ,no description of the character, no personality development (i dont even know whats the mc personality, u can tell if theres a prologue or story before the awakening), overall i will give 3stars, except for world background, which is soul land/ douluo dalu. soul land is one of my favourite so. .4 stars for this. I hope this feedback can motivate author to be better, perhaps author can re edit or find his own solution :)