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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv143yr
2021-05-14 13:50

Although concept is good....😅 but progress of plot is really bad & typical cliché at every point of story... so much cliché destroys the plot... & that dumb family is so dumb that I can't take it anymore...... every single one of them including mc...... MC be like: what can I do to against him, he's father..... _ you can blackmail him _ you can leave the house _ you can become head of family _ you can combine farmers to make a super farmer & your slave there's so much he can do but no dumb mc has dumb excuses for dumb family 😂

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Profane_Insanity
Profane_InsanityLv3

Your right! He just trying to brainwash himself. Lol.

SEISHOKU_SHA108
SEISHOKU_SHA108Lv6

Thanks For The Warning ⚠ i dodged a brain dead novel

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

I also don't make reviews 😅 like this, but in this perticular case, I can't seem to resist...🙌🤷 & you are welcome 🍀🤞

SEISHOKU_SHA108:Thanks For The Warning ⚠ i dodged a brain dead novel
nd26
nd26Lv3

I am not saying you are wrong persay but this novel is for light-hearted reading. Him destroying the house every time and saying that "I thought i would be albe to control it" i am like i want to beat him up so bad, that i closed it for a moment calmed down and read it for fun with my brain off.😂😂

reincarnation_end
reincarnation_endLv4

thanks for the warning

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

maybe but for me, if I keep reading it it feels like my blood pressure will rise my brain would Stop working my soul will transcend my heart would burst What type of person could get so low to even think writing such a cringe plot. even water which is essential for life~ will become poison if you drink too much . & cringe is not even essential but he still put it in every frekin paragraph of story .... sigh*😅 🤞 peace ☮️🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀

nd26:I am not saying you are wrong persay but this novel is for light-hearted reading. Him destroying the house every time and saying that "I thought i would be albe to control it" i am like i want to beat him up so bad, that i closed it for a moment calmed down and read it for fun with my brain off.😂😂
CockroaChan
CockroaChanLv12

if you are a new reader its fun but if you are a long time reader clichè like this is super dumb.

nd26:I am not saying you are wrong persay but this novel is for light-hearted reading. Him destroying the house every time and saying that "I thought i would be albe to control it" i am like i want to beat him up so bad, that i closed it for a moment calmed down and read it for fun with my brain off.😂😂
to_live_is_evil
to_live_is_evilLv12

and the mc always show off too much and some are even forced if not because of the system it would definitely be the worst novel ive ever read

Young_fruit_Smiley:maybe but for me, if I keep reading it it feels like my blood pressure will rise my brain would Stop working my soul will transcend my heart would burst What type of person could get so low to even think writing such a cringe plot. even water which is essential for life~ will become poison if you drink too much . & cringe is not even essential but he still put it in every frekin paragraph of story .... sigh*😅 🤞 peace ☮️🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀
mr_games_for_days
mr_games_for_daysLv15

The progress isnt bad if you Like being practically unbeatable within the first hundred chapters although they skip month… the town walls suddenly appear and all these deals with manir owners could have been more chapters. skip a few months is okay but it happens to often in this book like every 10-20 chapters

OddZilla
OddZillaLv4

youre right the mc is so open using he's ability even common people is so good keeping secrets

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

it's our kryptonite cliches 😷

CockroaChan:if you are a new reader its fun but if you are a long time reader clichè like this is super dumb.
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

right.... !!🙌

mr_games_for_days:The progress isnt bad if you Like being practically unbeatable within the first hundred chapters although they skip month… the town walls suddenly appear and all these deals with manir owners could have been more chapters. skip a few months is okay but it happens to often in this book like every 10-20 chapters
Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

So a dumb mc. Had his wish fulfilled, but hasn't yet to open it's greatest potential. To naive, and to conceited of his golden finger. Anyway, isn't all mc is like that? they can't even use their own gifts for 100%.

Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

At least your soul will transcend. To another world of Fantasy

Young_fruit_Smiley:maybe but for me, if I keep reading it it feels like my blood pressure will rise my brain would Stop working my soul will transcend my heart would burst What type of person could get so low to even think writing such a cringe plot. even water which is essential for life~ will become poison if you drink too much . & cringe is not even essential but he still put it in every frekin paragraph of story .... sigh*😅 🤞 peace ☮️🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀🍀
Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

sigh*😅 how did it got picked is above me...... most of trial reads are the same nowadays...... furthermore, these working overgrown men transmigrate & end up being dumb + doing stupid things is also above me.... it's very rare to find these good ones... if you want, just go to my profile & check out my list.... you won't regret it.. 👍👍😉

Silencer5EMR3:So a dumb mc. Had his wish fulfilled, but hasn't yet to open it's greatest potential. To naive, and to conceited of his golden finger. Anyway, isn't all mc is like that? they can't even use their own gifts for 100%.
Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

I'm prefer mc with army in hos disposal. Example ; Solo Leveling, Mechanical God Emperor, The Legendary Mech Army. Two of them are Eastern Fantasy, and one in Magical Realism.

Young_fruit_Smiley:sigh*😅 how did it got picked is above me...... most of trial reads are the same nowadays...... furthermore, these working overgrown men transmigrate & end up being dumb + doing stupid things is also above me.... it's very rare to find these good ones... if you want, just go to my profile & check out my list.... you won't regret it.. 👍👍😉
Eldritch
EldritchLv14

The thing that really gets me is that the Mc bashes others for being stupid when he is a total moron himself.

Jonas_Jowns
Jonas_JownsLv1

Save your money and not waste on this. the story Could have been a great read but unfortunately the aithor and the tRanslator butchered it.

Hunter_Roberts
Hunter_RobertsLv15

this book is absolutely trash Ed could do a better job

Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

That's about right.... 😂

Hunter_Roberts:this book is absolutely trash Ed could do a better job
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