I did not pay attention to constructive criticism(I do not understand this), I was carried away by reading. Well, the novel is good, but at a fast pace(although not bad), I would like you to continue writing, I wish you good luck))) P. S>>> If there are errors, I apologize, I used Google translator.
ALiVe
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