Review Detail of Kairon_D13 in Rogue Demigod

Item: Rogue Demigod
Rating: 3.6

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Good setting, good concept, good grammar. Writing style can be improved more. Story progression needs a lot of improvement, as its too forced right now. It is not organic feeling.

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Thanks for yoUr input, i always wonder if people liked it or not, but no one else wrights reviews

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