Like the other reviewer, I was quite confused, given that I've never read a chat novel before. Grammar can still be improved, along with a clearer description on world-building that the story takes place in. Maybe increase a bit more on vocabulary and choice of words. Nevertheless, keep up the good work, author-san! Ganbare!
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