Review Detail of Lentin in Tale of MAKKON

Everything is perfect! The story progression is in between is neutral which gives it a nice and easy read. The way the world is described is a-okay. I always keep an eye out on world-building because that is what pushes the imagination for readers. On writing quality, your grammar is perfect and there's no spelling mistakes. But be careful when you use actives and passives in your story. Some of your verbs are in active tense, which should be in passive. Definitely gonna keep this in my library! Keep it up, author-san!