Review Detail of Fallout_Armageddon in Fallout 3: Seven Tens

Item: Fallout 3: Seven Tens
Rating: 5

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Fallout_ArmageddonLv143yrFallout_Armageddon

very well wwritten, and has massive potential I do hope that you don't drop it, but honestly I don't get my hopes up anymore either way good luck I'll be here until it's finished, or dropped

Fallout 3: Seven Tens

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Very well written? That was sarcastic, right? The writing is 2/5 at best. Reading the first chapter was painful. I mean, how many characters are in the scene? Is it 1 or 2? The author uses he and they interchangeably which is wrong. He mixes up tenses. Passive voice. Telling. The writing is below average.

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