Review Detail of Skaystha in The Shinobi of Straw Hats

here is the point man every thing is good expect 1 thing?? why are you copying and pasting one piece. If I say you are portraying MC as 3rd character view you just made him a mob like. if you don't change any thing or plot just keep MC for mob cleaning job?? you may try to make MC revalent a little as I see you are only copy pasting original one piece MC is just a elite mob which wipes weaker mob. It's not a story man there is almost no development of MC he is just getting stronger as elite mob. as I liked it at start personality of MC but through mid way I just started to doze of as it becomes more and more revalent that it almost copy paste just a little tweak and MC perspective added