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Tread_zanLv13yrTread_zan

I like the balance between dialog and narration. Also, the places are very well described. The author doesn't shy away from some difficult to use words. Overall, it was good but needs some more work on character introduction and such:)

Uniting The World of Alteria With My Headphones

OwariDa

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Thank you very much for your review, I'll keep that in mind!