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Jagriti_Mandal
Jagriti_MandalLv13yr
2021-01-04 12:57

I read 2 chapters.No proper punctuation Mark's are placed,no proper full stops and capital letters.First know the basics then start writing.I didn't like the content.

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Jagriti_Mandal
Jagriti_MandalLv1

Your most welcome.

Fidha_Zaara:Thank you for clarification mam
Fidha_Zaara
Fidha_ZaaraAuthor

Thank you for the comment and @chhandamandal I think that you misunderstood and it's not like that [img=coins]

Jagriti_Mandal
Jagriti_MandalLv1

What did I misunderstand?

Fidha_Zaara
Fidha_ZaaraAuthor

everything

Jagriti_Mandal
Jagriti_MandalLv1

I didn't misunderstand.You have written in a bad manner.It's your duty to improve grammar before writing story.

Fidha_Zaara
Fidha_ZaaraAuthor

Thank you for clarification mam

Fidha_Zaara
Fidha_ZaaraAuthor

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Jagriti_Mandal
Jagriti_MandalLv1

Read my stories too.

Fidha_Zaara
Fidha_ZaaraAuthor

Kindly not sure to read because I have to write mine too

Jagriti_Mandal
Jagriti_MandalLv1

This is why everything in your story has no inspired content.Your just writing useless content.

Fidha_Zaara:Kindly not sure to read because I have to write mine too
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