Review Detail of phoenixhyperion in Retiring as an Incompetent Queen

Honestly, your story reminds me of my favorite isekai story. Especially the setting and your main character. And I love that. As much as I like your character, I want to see the world more in your character's perspective. Broading your description in their emotions, perception and reactions I think you can improve this story more in that aspect. Overall you did a great job in this story author. Keep up the good work!