Review Detail of Darkstep in Full Breath (Avatar Fanfic)

This is a pretty good one with as now a slightly op mc. The overall vibe is pretty good but will probably be a split between preferences. And for the other crossover character you introduced it was alright. If it's just a character who will not affect the world background (ie bringing ninjas) then you could have done your own character and make it slightly better. But so far it's good so far.