Review Detail of amaturewriter in DxD: Millenium God

long story short I love the powers...chps long and its a good dxd ff. compared to the other shit here its better, way better. MC starts in cannon time but its entertaining, only 6 chps but isnt like other stories where MC follows main cast or something, sure he meets em but its done good so far. plus author fked cannon and added new shit, so here hoping for more. u like smut, its there, dont know how to rate but its there, but not childish [ just check old dxd smut ffs...this is not like that ] so that nice. whilst its kinda cliche its not exaggerated to a stupid extent nor does plot revolve around- how MC looks. this ff actually is one does it good, the author knows how to describe MC's looks and not make story retarded and ruin it. I like that. -- just build relationships, dont make MC or his lovers sluts, if u follow cannon try add new shit, other than that its cool. give MC a good motive for existence. other than that GL - **: i think, the puzzle is the strongest, gives user luck, and in the hands of the protag, one becomes a god