Review Detail of aigaakabane14 in Empty bro

LGBTQ+ books are really rare to see here, okay so before I start talking about the cons, let's talk about the pros, your story development is very nice and your stability of updates is very good, character design is nice but your writing could use some work, I love how you translated the foreign words, but, sometimes you forget to use capital letters when you start a dialogue, but I can exclude the text part at the end of chapter 1 since I think you were trying to be realistic cause that's how people text nowadays lol.