Review Detail of Veryl in Burning City

So... i know is still a little to early to give a review, but since i liked the story imma give my opinion. The writing style is very descriptive and fluid, i loved how you described the moments about his past with quick flashbacks or windows on the past, as for the tecnical part there were no huge grammar mistakes that i could see, maybe a misspelling or two but appart from that i really liked it, hope for a new chapter OwO!