Review Detail of ominouslyomenix in A Night A Secret A Child

I read up till about chapter 4-6, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. Although this book isn't something I personally wouldn't read, it is a very interesting story. Aside from some grammatical errors and the story being slow-paced, it has potential. I will say to change the rating from General Audiences to Parental Guidance Suggested. Also, females don't normally say 'girl' at the end of every sentence. Make sure to do research on **** pregnancy and pregnancy in general. I'm sure this will become a great book.