The beginning really got me hooked. I love how your very descriptive about your world background, giving reader's insight and proper understanding of your book was a great addition ++ With only 3 Chapters you've captured my interest. I really like these kinds of troupe where an innocent boy slowly begins to change as he seeks vengeance for his family's death. Your writing style is really great and really descriptive giving me the impression that I was like watching the scenes play out inside my head. Long chapters is great addition++ Are you maintaining these kinds of chapters? If you are made sure to set certain days to update so you can rest as well. Waiting for more Chapters! Keep up the great Work Author!! [img=update][img=recommend]
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