Review Detail of Brooke_Moore_3337 in Under His Command (Scifi/Romance)

One of the better-written stories I've come across so far. It's a low bar to clear, but the sentence structure, grammar, pacing, imagery, and characterization are excellently done- I hope I get to see more of the world and meet more alien species as the story continues, since this writer does have a flair for some interesting humanoid builds.