Review Detail of thewallflower in Yet, Again

hi @king_and_dinah I would like to thank you for investing your time to check on my first book and i really appreciate the feedback coming from others. I too think I should work on my book covers sooner or later since I'm still contemplating whether the covers that i've choose is the right one. Again thank you for giving your feedback and I'd look forward to improve my writing so that it will be more fun to read. (p/s your review give me the motivation to do better)