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Missa_Collingwood
Missa_CollingwoodLv113yr
2021-05-30 19:53

I usually read books with female leads but I saw this and it sounded so interesting that I tried it. It is awesome. I love how disinterested and arrogant he is. His attitude is everything.

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Seongjin
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𝕀𝕟𝕥𝕣𝕠 Hello author-nim! I am here with a seriously thought out review, as I believe it is given time I review the story. This story is probably one of my favorites. Although this story is one of my favorites, I will not just give a brainless review with 5-stars. This review consists of my real views and tips/advice on how this story could be improved for future readers reading experiences. 𝕎𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 ℚ𝕦𝕒𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 In my opinion the author's grammar, punctuation and word forming could be greatly improved. A lot of sentences are either missing words or worded terribly. Sometimes irrelevant sentences are put together instead of being seperated with a full stop. Originally I was going to give a 3-star for writing quality. However, because it wasn't completely unreadable, I gave it a 4-star. 𝕊𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝔻𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 For story development, I decided to rate it a 5-star. So far, from what I have read. The story development is good, it isn't too fast paced and it explains quite a few things. It shows the main character's process of returning to the same power of his previous life. The storyline/plot is very interesting and entertaining. I thoroughly enjoyed read this story so far. ℂ𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕒𝕔𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝔻𝕖𝕤𝕚𝕘𝕟 Character design, 2-star! Why? 1. There was almost no introduction to the main character at the beginning of the story. 2. Barely any explanation was made about his past life and history/background. 3. It was also unclear whether his name was the same as his current life in the past (I had to clarify with the author on this topic). 𝕌𝕡𝕕𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕥𝕒𝕓𝕚𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕪 I give the updating stability a 5-star. The author updates quite often. Most of the time 2 chapters are uploaded in one update. I am very satisfied with the upload times and chapters. 𝕎𝕠𝕣𝕝𝕕 𝔹𝕒𝕔𝕜𝕘𝕣𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕕 World background is fairly decent. Although not much is explained in the beginning. I let it slide as the world background is later explained in more detail. 4-stars for world background. 𝕆𝕦𝕥𝕣𝕠 Hopefully author-nim doesn't find this review too harsh...(• ▽ •;) 𝕋𝕠𝕥𝕒𝕝 ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨 4-stars

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