Review Detail of GoMagikarp in In MHA with a Pokemon quirk

There's definitely a story in here worth reading, unfortunately it's buried pretty deep. Besides the grammar which is okayish, if you ignore the total lack of capitalization, there's a lot of enjoy. Or there was. What started out as a goofy story with a well defined and solid system quickly spiraled out of control. Every chapter the author added more and more changes to what worked perfectly fine until the whole thing was a cluster**** of way too many ideas and powers. Needless to say, the MC is OP beyond belief and I don't even recognize what his quirk is any more. If the author had just let themselves continue with their original idea it would have been fine. Not perfect, but a good read. However, it feels like they're pandering to the spastic 12 year olds that scream OMG MEGA EVOLUTIONS! I WANT LEGENDARIES! and lost most of the features that made it worth reading.