Review Detail of MMickkWeeb in Unrivaled Mage!

The story is pretty good I mean The plot is enjoyable The magic system is decent and The mc isnt that dumb but isnt too smart either I mean i cant really judge The story well as im only at ch 7 while writing this. But there is a single problem that is very bad and thats The grammar. The story doesnt Flow well and The tenses are terrible. So i wanted to ask you author do you fix The tenses as The story goes or is it still terrible.