Review Detail of augradpamokos in Mahouka Koukou no Re-incarnation

Hello again, as I said in my previous review, if you put effort into the writing mistakes that I would keep reading your fanfic. And I keep to my word and came back to check out your later chapters, and can say that you definitely improved, and put some effort into it and I thank you for that. For anyone reading the 1st few chapters, they are still difficult to read, but the author put in the effort to fix his mistakes in later chapters so far and I believe he will keep it up. I'm deleting my previous review.