Hiiii author!!! Thank you for letting me review your work, what I can say is that, I commend the hook at the first chapter of your book, keeps the reader going, although I personally prefer you would not spoil everything in the first chapters and directly reveal it cus the momentum is kinda thrown off. OOF but as I went on,there's always something keeps me reading. Goodluck
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