Review Detail of Boobaslurper in Building A New World

Writing Quality: [4] still has many typos for now. i suggest author hire an editor for correcting them. Story Development: [5] freshly baked, at least for me and it seems to me author already have a goal in mind. Character Design: [4] most based on MGE but the rest are fantastic. there are even fan's character! and the women... 😍 and the MILF! 😍😍😍🤤🤤🤤 Updating Stability: [5] it's up there shown below the title World Background: [5] fantasy world but there are some lore, myth, legend like our own and there are some places that haven't yet discovered Overall: [4.6] i love this book 🤘