all is good so far I like it even the simple system skills and storyline is a good start ... I would just recommend you to get the childhood out of the way quickly ... don't let it drag on ... quick question tho how much are u planning to include the step mom with the future of the story ... also pirate, marine or bounty hunter?
CouchPotatoDandy
Được 5 người thích
giốngIt would be much better if he travels with his wives and with other future harem members and author just wanna give a suggestion that pls make mc's wife op too bcs if he really wanna be strongest in universes his wives should be Atleast galaxy level destroyers.😅
CouchPotatoDandy:First of all thanks for the support :) Now, about your questions/suggestions - The first chapters are just too get the story started, I plan to do a time skip in the next few chapters. And about Eragon's future plans, well, won't you prefer to be surprised?