Review Detail of MrChinchila in Rightful Vengeance

So, I really enjoy your prose. The first five(actually six if counting prologue) chapters from what I read were good. There were some rough sentences that need some editing though, that's why I can't grade your writing 5. But if you catch those punctuation details, it would be an easy 5. I checked and you seem to update every 2 days, so your updates are quite stable. Story, Character and World so far for me is a bit early to say, yet from what I read, I'm really enjoying it so far. Keep it up!