Good story with nice lemon scenes. No terrible things to break immersion or any significant bad stuff. Give it a try. The only cons I perceived are: the system with abilities that seems to be forgotten. The ' partners' that seems to dissappear or never mentioned. The time skips that rushed the pacing. The fights when they mentioned experience or gains no longer appeared. It also needs a lil bit of proofreading. Nevertheless, the pros outweigh anything and you can not deny the effort the author made (planning, discord with images, reader interactions, etc.) So author :
TheLustGod
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