Review Detail of Riyah404 in The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

I've read up to chapter twelve. This story feels warm. The author's note at the end of each chapter adds more warmth to the story. Maybe the author could let us peek at the past of Emily with bits of flashbacks so we can see or get a glimpse of how broken she had become. Needs a bit of improvement in grammars. But all in all, I like the warmth in this story. Hope that Emily's brothers can patch up her broken pieces and maybe Emily can do the same for her brothers. They also seem problematic., XD