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nessiaartLv23yrnessiaart

I really like your concept! Though I feel like your writing could be a bit more spaced and a little less cumbersome. I really love your story though and keep doing what your doing❤

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can you give me some advice to make it less cumbersome? it would be helpful.

3yr

nessiaartLv2nessiaart

you could try and save some points for other chapters for more suspense :)

PureBlood404:can you give me some advice to make it less cumbersome? it would be helpful.

3yr