Review Detail of Shionokami in Mekura Kenshi
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So after reading the first chapter of this story, I have but one thing to say "where's the rest?", honestly where is it? This is a really good start giving me flash backs of the good old days of Shonen stories! There are some things here and there that need some work but it's something that will get better with time so don't worry about it and keep giving us some more of this!
Mekura Kenshi
Barry_Thomas
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I appreciate the feedback! I dropped this chapter to gauge how well it would be perceived. especially since Anime tropes may not translate well to some people. Shounen is definitely the kind of audience and content i was going for. Once I get to Chapter 3-4 it will get a little darker, but Chapter 2 will be coming up soon!
Good I can't wait to see whats coming next! About the Anime tropes, I think that it translates well to the people here as a lot of it's users also love anime, manga and light novels, so don't worry about it, and keep going with your shonen type of story telling your on the right path of crearting something really cool!
Barry_Thomas:I appreciate the feedback! I dropped this chapter to gauge how well it would be perceived. especially since Anime tropes may not translate well to some people. Shounen is definitely the kind of audience and content i was going for. Once I get to Chapter 3-4 it will get a little darker, but Chapter 2 will be coming up soon!
Shionokami:Good I can't wait to see whats coming next! About the Anime tropes, I think that it translates well to the people here as a lot of it's users also love anime, manga and light novels, so don't worry about it, and keep going with your shonen type of story telling your on the right path of crearting something really cool!