Review Detail of TaintedMetal in Tyrants Last wish

So far so good on the work that's been done so far. Characters are great in terms of their presentation and the technique used here is respectable. Sometimes reading through the paragraphs can feel like there's much cause some sentences are jammed into one bigger paragraph, but this is one of those books that does require time to get through. Maybe some spacing for the larger paragraphs would be best. Maybe 2-3 sentences per paragraph unless the character is explaining something. Keep up the good work author!