Review Detail of JJLOLLERXD in The Multiverse Jumper
Xem lại chi tiết
Hey dude I really think that you should put more descriptions like what was his neighbourhood like, did he have friends or a social life? 🤨🧐 But other than that, I can’t wait for the next chapters!😃😁
The Multiverse Jumper
Slammeron01
Được 3 người thích
giốngTrả lời5
Slammeron01Tác giảSlammeron01
SaberswordguyLv5Saberswordguy
my dude it is what it is because from what I've seen from other authors like you writing a story is way harder then editing for example coloring in the monalisa is easier than drawing her good luck on this novel doe if this doesn't work out you can use this as experience to write future novels if your still interested but I do hope it will work out for yah
Slammeron01:Yes, I'm rewriting everything again, parts didn't make sense to me and I was the one who made it, so I'm bringing in a slightly altered backstory, and if I leave out stuff, I just found it irrelevant
Slammeron01Tác giảSlammeron01
Saberswordguy:my dude it is what it is because from what I've seen from other authors like you writing a story is way harder then editing for example coloring in the monalisa is easier than drawing her good luck on this novel doe if this doesn't work out you can use this as experience to write future novels if your still interested but I do hope it will work out for yah
Klazy_LabbitLv4Klazy_Labbit
Saberswordguy:my dude it is what it is because from what I've seen from other authors like you writing a story is way harder then editing for example coloring in the monalisa is easier than drawing her good luck on this novel doe if this doesn't work out you can use this as experience to write future novels if your still interested but I do hope it will work out for yah