Review Detail of Gallekryde in Zhoro's Universe:Loose Screws

The MC by far is the best part of this story. Both because of his uniqueness and because of the strength of the character's voice. When I was reading the chapters it felt like I was seeing the eyes through his lens versus watching like a dispassionate observer. There are a few stylistic tendencies which I found disruptive but that is mostly my subjective taste. The overruse of onomatopoeias stood out the most. Other than that, it is the start of one of the better webnovel series that I have read so great job author!