Review Detail of MichelleDavid7 in THE MESSENGER OF DEATH

It was a great story so far. The storyline is good which can progress into something thrilling. Minor grammar lapses but can be fixed. I like how the story gets unpredictable on some occasions. It would be great if the author can make it more relatable with better word choices. Overall, its a story with a lot of potentials showcasing the author's budding ability in writing. Looking forward to more updates -- more heartbreaks and bloody deaths!