Review Detail of AxlSLL in Marriage Affairs: Mysterious Family Line.

You've done a good job with the context. The setting has well portrayed the Taiwanese culture and this is something that you can appreciate when you read the story. The story starts bland, and it's a little boring to read at first. This however starts to change as the plot progresses, but you definitely need more action, more hooking for readers. You also need to work with your grammar. Lots of paragraphs and sentences require strong editing. There are lots of information that don't actually contribute anything to the plot. Try using a grammar correction app. The main character is boring and doesn't show up much personality at first. However, as she is put in more situations she slowly starts to show her interesting and human side. Keep working on it and don't stop writing!