So, the story is really good, like really good, it's not your 'classic' reincarnation story where the mc just gets cheats out of nowhere and has insane plot armor with super luck, also, just by not having a f*ucking HAREM, this story is already better than most isekais out there, let's summarize this shall we ? No grammar errors and easy to read story. ✔️5⭐ Fully original isekai for once ✔️5⭐(story development) Regular updates ✔️ 5⭐ The world is a classic fantasy world of swords and magic from what I read. 4⭐ Sadly I dropped this story because I didn't like the mc, don't misunderstand me though, the mc has a really well built personnality, it's just that I couldn't recognise myself in the mc because we just don't have the same personnality, we are incompatible so I won't continue a story that I am not able to enjoy (it's as if you try to play mobile games on a pc, it just isn't as enjoyable on emulator as the real thing because the apps aren't made for pc use) So that's why I gave 3 ⭐ to character design but if I were to rate it objectively and not based on my tastes then it would be a 5⭐ immediatly just for the fact that the mc isn't either full white or full black like a goody two shoes/hero/good samaritan or pure evil/brainless/revenge driven/or people who want to prove they aren't trash(like most CN mcs). That makes it 4.4 ⭐ rated on my tastes and 4.6⭐ if not.
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This review really put a smile on my face, and I appreciate you being so objective, looking at it factually AS WELL AS by your tastes. It means a lot to me that you took the time to do this, and it's a pleasure that my very first review that was written without any misunderstandings was as kind, and as informed, as this. Maybe you'll come across my stories again, I have two stories in the works with male main characters who are much different than Hina. If not, no worries, and thank you for making a sleepy teenager smile.
I'll try your other story if I can finish reading the tens of other stories in my library lol
Rebuilt_Kitsunii:This review really put a smile on my face, and I appreciate you being so objective, looking at it factually AS WELL AS by your tastes. It means a lot to me that you took the time to do this, and it's a pleasure that my very first review that was written without any misunderstandings was as kind, and as informed, as this. Maybe you'll come across my stories again, I have two stories in the works with male main characters who are much different than Hina. If not, no worries, and thank you for making a sleepy teenager smile.
author i have some questions before reading and those are 1) will mc love his harem 2) will he care for his harem(i have bad expirience with futa mc's one was treated as a cum generator for horny woman and the other was doing it with everything that was woman ) 3) will there be drama (like one girl does not like harem and breaks up with mc or they start a cold war and so on or mc can't take her so he/she tells her to forget him and find someone else ) 4) will mc take his harem with him/her(again one where futa mc left many pregnant woman on there own with his/her child)
Rebuilt_Kitsunii:This review really put a smile on my face, and I appreciate you being so objective, looking at it factually AS WELL AS by your tastes. It means a lot to me that you took the time to do this, and it's a pleasure that my very first review that was written without any misunderstandings was as kind, and as informed, as this. Maybe you'll come across my stories again, I have two stories in the works with male main characters who are much different than Hina. If not, no worries, and thank you for making a sleepy teenager smile.
Thanks for reaching out to me! I'll try to answer as best I can. 1.) Yes! Every member of the harem is loved and important, and also contributes to the plot enormously, whether it's a part you can currently read or not yet. Entire plot arcs are planned, but only possible because of certain harem members! 2.) My MC is actually female, there's appearances of futa but only in specific instances 3.) Um... well, nobody gets pregnant, that's not my favorite jam, but yeah, every character stays together as of where I'm at now, and it's a healthy relationship! No cold wars, as you put it~
Thesoultaker88:author i have some questions before reading and those are 1) will mc love his harem 2) will he care for his harem(i have bad expirience with futa mc's one was treated as a cum generator for horny woman and the other was doing it with everything that was woman ) 3) will there be drama (like one girl does not like harem and breaks up with mc or they start a cold war and so on or mc can't take her so he/she tells her to forget him and find someone else ) 4) will mc take his harem with him/her(again one where futa mc left many pregnant woman on there own with his/her child)
thanks i had some bad expiriences with futa mc...but seems nice i will give it a try
Rebuilt_Kitsunii:Thanks for reaching out to me! I'll try to answer as best I can. 1.) Yes! Every member of the harem is loved and important, and also contributes to the plot enormously, whether it's a part you can currently read or not yet. Entire plot arcs are planned, but only possible because of certain harem members! 2.) My MC is actually female, there's appearances of futa but only in specific instances 3.) Um... well, nobody gets pregnant, that's not my favorite jam, but yeah, every character stays together as of where I'm at now, and it's a healthy relationship! No cold wars, as you put it~
I appreciate that~ This story can be tragic and heavy at times- but the eventually genuine romance is nothing if not healthy, I swear it, and lust or not, the characters do genuinely fall for one another as time goes on.
Thesoultaker88:thanks i had some bad expiriences with futa mc...but seems nice i will give it a try
...will there be a chance of a harem member of the mc to dei ? i dont care for freinds or so but i care more for the harem...and one question this is spoiler but has mc confessed or is a relashionship with a girl in the latest chapters or not yet
Rebuilt_Kitsunii:I appreciate that~ This story can be tragic and heavy at times- but the eventually genuine romance is nothing if not healthy, I swear it, and lust or not, the characters do genuinely fall for one another as time goes on.
Sorry, but that IS a massive spoiler for new readers, so I won't answer that one. All I'll say is; I swear to you that in every way possible, this isn't like the typical harem anime
Thesoultaker88:...will there be a chance of a harem member of the mc to dei ? i dont care for freinds or so but i care more for the harem...and one question this is spoiler but has mc confessed or is a relashionship with a girl in the latest chapters or not yet
shit, I understand your review, at first I thought, why would you discard a good work because of the MC's personality? Then I got to chapter two and I knew ... BDSM is not good for me, much less that mc is m, how the devil is imposed on him I do not see it as nothing more than taking advantage of someone.
