Overall, pretty good start. Author's writing quality has improved, I see. The world seems quite interesting. Looking forward to see what happens to the characters. Keep writing, author, you will improve!
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giốngThanks for the review, I know I'm 3 years late but still wanted to acknowledge the few comments which I couldn't. I was having a lot of stress due to family and school matter hope you can enjoy the newer chapters. Also if you got some critique please let me know. Hope you can forgive me for not writing for a while. Thank you, reviews help a lot.