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4very
4veryLv133yr4very

From what I've seen so far, this book is promising! Although the author needs to work on slowing down his writing and checking his grammar it's an overall great book. I like the idea of a Haikyuu book, I was thinking about foing one but I decided not to because I'm already working on a book. Anyway I love where the book us going and I hope you can have fun with this book. Also dont let hate comments get to you!

He Who Is In Haikyuu With 1 Wish!

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PsychoticTL
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How about I go back and check my grammar I mean, I have nothing to do-

PsychoticTL
PsychoticTLTác giảPsychoticTL

I’m sorry, I tried doing it- I edited 3 chapters, and then I got bored of doing that-

PsychoticTL:How about I go back and check my grammar I mean, I have nothing to do-
4very
4veryLv134very

It's fine as long as you try. You dont have to just once done with a paragraph try to skim through it and check for any missed words or grammar errors.

PsychoticTL:I’m sorry, I tried doing it- I edited 3 chapters, and then I got bored of doing that-
Diana_Gerth
Diana_GerthLv1Diana_Gerth

Ur grama is a bit messy but ur storey is very good keep update ing more chapters the more u writing the more u learn

PsychoticTL:I’m sorry, I tried doing it- I edited 3 chapters, and then I got bored of doing that-