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THIS IS MY PERSONAL OPINION the first couple of chapters is really confusing, the plot goes back and forth and then back and forth again. The first chapter in Naruto world, second before he died, then back to Naruto. I think it's better to just write with linear storyline. And then he got called as a champion, after like what?...±14 chapters...the story is just too rush. And in chapter 20, danzo said "in the last 2 years, Anbu went missing blablabla...(you get the point)", so I assume time skip? and sometimes the chapters didn't continue where it left off in the chapters? or is it just me. I kinda don't like the way all the women suddenly got smitten by the mc.

Time Emperor (Champion)

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