the story is fine its just the mc hes boring and uninteresting honestly his companion is more interesting. She goes through progression training, the mc doesn't he just stays the same doesn't really grow like at all
Feliprins
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giốngFeliprins:You just need to reach chapter 20 plus if you want to see the character growth of MC... the 20 first chapters are setting the world and plot for the future... My chapter are smaller than most, usually a nornal chapter is around 3 of mine, which makes 20 chapters more like 8-9 decent sized ones.
I mean its something called character development, but honestly if a you need to reach a certain amount of chapters before you need to be interested in a story then you're not really doing a goobjob, the point of a novel is to pull in your readers from the very start, i honestly haven't read it yet so i'll give it a try and see if i can read up to chapter 20 myself lol
Visper667:Shouldn't need to go through 20 chapters just to see the MC grow..