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I find it a really cool story, there are ways in which you could improve the story but i like where you are going with it. Just that somethings are bit to fast paced.
Guiding Light
Vallori
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The pacing is troubling, I agree to a certain extent. Some things I do not want to rush, but they end up rushed because I always seem to find myself with no time to write, and I have 2 stories I try and write weekly. And, now during summer, you would think free time would be a given; but no. I have almost no free time which leads the story to suffer a small bit. But, the pacing should hopefully fix itself as it continues. Have A Wonderful Day!
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Vallori:The pacing is troubling, I agree to a certain extent. Some things I do not want to rush, but they end up rushed because I always seem to find myself with no time to write, and I have 2 stories I try and write weekly. And, now during summer, you would think free time would be a given; but no. I have almost no free time which leads the story to suffer a small bit. But, the pacing should hopefully fix itself as it continues. Have A Wonderful Day!