Review Detail of Vynris_Foxtail in A Fish That Can Evolve

It needs a litter more editing here and there and it does ho a bit to fast in the Beging but I say it's ok for a novel like this at least up to page 14 or so (as I got to about there before it got to annoying for me with certain mistakes...gives me a tad bit of a headache...) but otherwise it needs a bit of editing and all and it will be really good instead of just good...keep up the good work and good jop...bye